1) The pitch: see above
2) A reflection on feedback from the last pitch: Unfortunately, due to technical difficulties, I was not able to get my first pitch post before the deadline, but I will list some of my own self-reflections on the video. The biggest reflection for me was that I needed to get the video done long before the deadline to account for any technical difficulties. I also felt that I should have done more to get better lighting for my video, as well as look more professional than I did in the first video. The most important thing to the overall quality of the video was to write up a better script than I did for the first one.
3) What I changed based on my feedback: The biggest thing I changed in this second elevator pitch was to get it done long before the deadline. I also took my time and wrote out a detailed script that I was able to refer to while speaking to remember my major talking points and the general flow of the pitch. To solve the issues with the presentation, I had a friend of mine film for me and we chose a location that has lots of natural lighting. I also made sure to dress to impress, like I would were I to deliver an actual elevator pitch.
